Voted For: final

final
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had no multis.. your imagery was nice throughout your verse.. emotion was present, and good, as well.. you went about the topic in a pretty nice way.. i enjoyed reading your verse..

CopyWrite
structure is alright.. some of your lines were stretched though.. flow falls off a little.. because at times it seemed as if you over did the vocabulary.. you had nice multis.. imagery is alright.. once again, i think the vocabulary, while good at times, kind of took away from your verse.. emotion was pretty good.. i think you went about the topic in a pretty good way.. your verse had the potential to be tight, but i dont think you elaborated enough on what you were trying to say..

Overall
CopyWrite had more multis.. and a better vocabulary.. both had pretty good emotion.. thought overused at times.. final had the better overall structure.. the more stable flow.. better imagery.. and elaborated better on the given topic.. so.. basing off of that.. i got final taking this.. pretty good battle though..

VOTE - FINAL

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