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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
wow...easy win imo this wasnt even close
emotion-mista tha sickness you actually had good emotion in your piece...i felt it there a lot but mistas was more deep because of the words he used to describe shit so he got the edge in this aspect
imagery-mista definately...basically described how shit looked a lot better then sickness...good words showing what he was saying you did good here...
beginning/end-mista this is the easiest aspect mista won...sickness, when you said the soldier line i was like wtf? where did that come from...you didnt give no backround information and it felt like the whole intro was left out...and the ending was horrible really played out and the whole verse was just like mediocre...no vocab...if he got votes thats amazing d/r, mista you had a really good ending i thought and the beginning had good imagery so i liked that
overall no hate to you sickness but mista won easily...good luck to both
peace
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