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Voted For: One M.B.
oneman band takes this easly, no need to explain myself
OMB, you had the wordplay and the mutlies and the metaphores and the strucuture.
lol
you had everything needed for a battle, your punches and personals could have been alot better, but you just need to keep on battling and shit, that is the only way to get better, also your punches didnt hit that hard, and their where alot of fillers in this battle
KEsse your fucking verse was so strectched it is not even funny, man you need to work on your strcuture for real and work on your meta[hores, everythi gwas kinda wack, but once you fix your strucuture then you will b e better
vote=OMB
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