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Old 03-09-05, 10:08 PM   #28
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Voted For: Hot Sauce

ok now hotsauce first of all, your shit hurt my eyes man... Fix your fucking structure dude, stop using " " and ~ ok, but overall you won this battle, way harder punches, nice multi's too, decent meta's blah at personels, it was a good verse though, try looking at Cannabarz or .:Jack Rackam:. cuz that's how you can learn to use multi's and still have agood structure, you'll eleavte off them... Night fall, rap battling isnt just rhyming words, go check out Lyrical Flowz or Jimmy Pocketz, and learn to use personels and meta's off them, elevate off that, and you should have no problem... but hot sauce takes this, for actually having punches/

v/ HS