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not bad i actually thought you dropped pretty good in this the stucutre wasnt so good but the flow and emotion was very good the concept you gave was tight kinda liek this would be dope on a audio cuz of the way you said shit, like ill fuckin fuckin kinda like Method man song ya feel me. pz

Speats:
pretty good man great stucture flow was hella good the concept was great and i was feelin ya verse alot, great decision on the words just a dope OM collab

RTF in my Poem "Once Upon A Time" links in the sig thanks peace