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Old 03-09-05, 10:40 PM   #11
Dabatos
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wow very nice verse man well poem lol.. i really liked it.. i liked how u sed even wen my brain disinegratess.. you will still have the memories..thats nice.. but i liked the twist at the end.. very good.. the emotion on here was also very nice.. and i could really feel your imagery on here.. 8/10...

plz leave feedback on my poem The most dangerous disease
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