shit was decent but your lines are way streched, you need to work on re-woring your lines to make them not so streched, this was a pretty decent disss tho you guys shouold battle, wait never mind hes a BITTER, i honestly hate bitters, so he has lost all respect

LOL white boys listen to slipknot
^^^^^lol that shit wa funny

you had mad multies and shit but still the lines where streched if you had decent strucuture then this would have been hella dope, i like the word play and metaphores,

if your rhymes where fire i would stop drop and role em
^^decent

but all in all good shit yo
keep dropping them and you will get your shit in the hall of fame yo

RTF on a battle of mines in my sig