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Old 03-10-05, 01:18 PM   #33
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From: Sacramento, CA
This was feedback posted for hotshh!

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hotshh!! won this battle because his verse flowed better his rhymes rhymed better he had a nice closer and good punches ok multies i liked

cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen
Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics


.Grafh your verse was pretty good but the rhymes were off a little this was my favorite line

Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile

the first "gay oriented punchline" that acctually made sense that i've read in a while

overall ok battle

V/ Hotshh!!

but i dont got 800 votes sorry
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