yeah this piece is a nice drop i'm surprised nobody has left feed back on it but it'z a short letta neva the less...but u got sum good vocab...structure was nice...i like the emotion cuz it makes those hopeless romantics out there wanna cry lol...but naw overall it was good just wish u would have wrote a lil more 2 not leave people hangin' on 8.0/10 & duke must sure 2 elevate in ur wordplay 4 ur next piece no hate...return the favor in my poem: Wanna Change My Life?? ya dig