ight dex is it a ight piece u dropped all u need is 2 fix up ur structure....work on ur wordplay a lil more....elaborate & go in-depth wit ur topic so u can make ur reader feel ya pain on y she won't understand what's going on but overall i'll give it 7.0/10 ur not bad at this whole poetry thang but just work on it & u'll elevate ova time....make sure 2 return the favor in my poem Wanna Change My Ways?? YA DIG