Voted For: One M.B.

this was one sided the whole way

kesse...work on ya multis and punches more kid
its like u were jus text freestyling
that probly woulda sounded nice in audio
but this is tex....u have 2 be able 2 spit it
in tex and audio...thats how ya drop should be
develop some more personals
do a lil research on ya comp...makes it easier kid

one
u had everything pretty much raped up
king of multis of course
nice similies
and perfect structure
but um work on ya punches a lil more
those need 2 stand out
it got lost in ya vocab and multis

Vocab Multies Personals Punches

keyz 2 success kidz......

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