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Old 03-10-05, 08:39 PM   #14
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Alright Man Good Verse You Had Some Nice Ish, Vocabulary Was Here, Punches Was Pretty Good And Structure Was Nice, Your Meta's Could Get Upped Though Man, Wordplay Hmm, Okay Man Over All This Verse Was Decent Had A Little Bit Of Everything I Was Digging, Try And Use Multi's Man It'll Help You Out Fo Sho

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Alright Nice Verse You Had Some Col Punches Nothing Special, Personals Hmm Naaaw, Vocabulary Was Pretty Good Man Structure Wasn't Nice Though Work On That Man, Also Your Meta's Need Some Help Read OMB Tutorials In The Forum, Over All Need To Elevate

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