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Old 03-10-05, 08:46 PM   #16
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whoa iw asnt really feeling your punches try uppin and usin a lil simiples more often and using some better creativty and up to a few metas in there as well, the rest of your verse was pretty good, great flow no forced rhymes i liked the rest just try uppin them punches a lil more pz

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i was feeling that ish, tight punches very good damn stucture and flow no forced rhymes i was really feeling the punchlines tho made the verse stand out and creaitvty was flawless keep doin that ish and you'll see some sooner collabs with me coming. pz

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