Voted For: Indeph

CJ
whoa you suprized me the stucture was as good but the flow was very good the vocab was great the emotion was pretty good but the thing i didnt feel was your imagery it seemed like you would change shit up a bit and jock it around work on that and it would be alot better at topicals, its all you really need, i kinda got that same problem, pz

Indeph
well of coarse you got this the stucutre was ight coulda been better emotion was flawless and the imagery was flawless the vocab was super dope as well i thought you took this alot better and i like the way you write each line you changed it up a lil better to understand, thank god!, pz

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