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Voted For: Indeph
Indeph
came out pretty damn good nice imagery and great emotion threwout the topic the vocab was very great and i seen very great wording and it was just super great and i like the way you write each line now before it was more hard to understand ish every so on
CJ
i thought you had a pretty good verse but you lacked good imagery and stucutre i thought you needed to up your vocab a bit more but the emotion was very great and the flow was flawless
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