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Old 03-10-05, 11:45 PM   #7
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Voted For: Kesse


Kesse
Good Verse Man, You Had Some Nice Decent Punches, Smelt Some Personals In Here Was Dope, Some Dope Vocabulary man Nice Verse, Structure Was There, Add Some Wordplay In here, Get Some Multi's Nice Meta's Man Thsis Verse Was Nice Yo, Overall..9/10

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Man You Need To Elevate, Punches, Structure Personals, Meta's You Had Nothing Vocabulary Was Whacked As Ish You Had No Decent Wordplay, Structure Was All Over I Couldn't Read Ish You Wrote, Your Lyrics Is Garabge Kid, Read OMB's Tutorials And You'll Be Cool...4/10

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Return The Favor Man Me Vs PICTUREPERFECT2 Up In My Sig, Good Battle No Hate, One
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