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Old 03-11-05, 02:19 AM   #16
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Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

ok you win this shit, very easy

DOT, your strucuture was too short, but i guess it was good, you also need to use better metaphores and better wordplay, you could also re-word some things to make them hit harder, but decent just not good enough for him, take me time to prewrite(if you do)
but decent you still got mad time to elevate

FLOW, good shit but not that good, just alot better than him, so word you win, all you have to do is stop with the self glorifacation and you will be alot better, lol
i know hes wack but yo, lol

vote=flow

yo, j dot we can battle if you want, its up to you
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