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Better than you..
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listening. chorus is pretty trippy. i dont really like the effect you used on ya vocals here. it kinda makes it sound cheap. the beat is kinda boring except on the chorus. but your drop is actually alright. you definately got potential if you keep working and improve your flow. and your lyrics are sorta a bid average. rappin about guns n shit its all been done before know what i mean? try to put something down that is more relevant that will impact someone who listens to it. try to connect with em. aiight man. good shit.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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