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Old 03-11-05, 08:02 AM   #12
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Voted For: Prophysics

Im gunna give it to prophysics

This was close man. both of ya'll had tite verse

Prophysics:

U r opener was ok but the rhyme was kinda wack. get a better vocab, but it was a nice personal so id give it a 7/10
da second bar was pretty cool, like how ya played of the word ILL, plus it was a nice punch. 8/10
3 rd bar was wack man. it had no concept at all. 5/10
4th bar was ite but i didnt really get the punch, plus bad spelling mistake. 6/10
the closer wasnt all that man. thats da second most important bar of all. give it a 4/10.
It was a pretty decent verse but u need to elevate a bit more wit ya vocab n punches. try n get better concepts also.

Dex:
Ya first bar was ite but i werent feeling it coz the rhyme was wack n it werent really a personal either so ima give it a 4/10
2nd bar was cool man. I like the quote lol plus it was a nice punch. 8/10
3 rd bar was average man, not really a decent punch, coulda came harder.5/10
4th bar man i werent feeling it, same wit da closer. that was wack for a closer, sounds as if ya impersernating the hindu dude from simpsons or summin. Any way the verses were both pretty tite but i favoured props!!! so there ya go. peace