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Old 03-11-05, 10:43 AM   #45
Wet Willy
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Voted For: hotshh!

wow.. no hate buck.. cause i kno we have our differences.. and u brought this battle to my attention.. but hot definitely good this one.. flow was nice the whole way thru on both parts although bucks was a little choppy at points.. structure was alrite.. buck u should try doing syllable counts.. it'll make ur verses sound nicer... but punch wise.. hotshh killed this... buck you need to learn the concept of wordplay.. your using similes and metaphors in ur verses but they dont have the proper wording to make them hit hard.. u had a few nice lines in there.. as to where hotshh had hard punches the whole way thru.. buck i think u just need to work on ur punches. and keep practicing that and in good time u will be able to batle the best on this site.. but for now.. battle people more on ur skill level.. no hate just keep working on it.. pz...
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