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Old 03-11-05, 11:50 AM   #5
Young Rico
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My last life's souvenir will be alive underground

^That was deep man.. I like that line....


Yeah like boy boy up there said this is a personal piece.. Nice emotion..
Put a lot into it... But I think some wordplay would've been nice nahmean?..
Keep the reader interested even if its a personal drop...
But this was nice man.. 1
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