The Big Bang Occured when I first spit a verse and destroyed half the earth

^Packed too many big words in there and it threw off the flow....

But either way, none were blessed wit the breath needed to spit bars to the death

^this had a good flow...kinda..Nice wording

Like you noticed some lines were a lil too long...BUT.. this was a good piece..
I did sutn like this a while ago.. But this was tight....
More wordplay and you would've had me hooked to it..
Keep up tho... 1

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