Seriously a tight dropped by both, imagery was there. Your concept develepment could've been worked a little but otherwise it was good. Vocab was there, remember vocabulary doesn't always have to be big, but effective, which is what you both did quite well on. Both of your structures played to your advantage and great flow was produced. Props to both of you for dropping dope.

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