yeah, i liked the twist you had there, some parts that didnt flow...but that didnt matter because i was hooked the whole time....images were popping outta nowhere, haha, vocab was what took the cake, very nice, portrayed your topic nicely and really brought out the core of your verse....thats some crazy shit though, but a different turn on the usually 'diss' or 'i hate life' open mics....nice drop man, keep up

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