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Old 03-11-05, 03:49 PM   #11
**GHOSTE**
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Scip gets this 1 for punches and wordlay...his punches were more thought out...and there was wordplay in every line...his barz were a little stretched...but not stretched to the point that u couldnt read it...u should try usin multies in ur verses...this will help alot wit ur structure...

wicked one had a tite verse...but it was too simple...the punches were a little played...and his multies were awkward...but it was good overall...work on flow...


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