i aint really follow it could be from my lack of attention but it really didnt grab me and make me want to finish readin it. i did tho and of course u had some nice lines in there and i can tell u got talent i jus wanna read some more of ya stuff this one wasnt bad at all i jus didnt get into it.so keep doin wat u do! ~respect

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