Voted For: Kesse

Okay...good battle here...

Kesse- You had a nice drop here. Some solid punches, a good flow and it was good to read. Maybe try to shorten your lines a bit because it makes the structure look weird. But it's all good because you used the same amount of words in all your lines. Your vocab was excellent and really added to your verse. Thre rhymes were good, and you came pretty hard
here.

this is over now, people voting for you have clearly stepped beyond comprehension
cause, with your rhymes, the only chance you winning would be in another dimension

^ Thought that was a solid original closer. Good drop Kesse.
8/10


OneStepBeyond - You came pretty good in this battle too. You had a good structure, it flowed well with some good punches. Some of the punches were a bit weak though, and in a couple lines it seemed as if you forced your rhymes to work. Example: the canadian line...

maybe i'll get a loss, i look on the brightside, so let me say again,
yeah i'll be 1 and 2... don't hcange the fact your Canadian...

^ Just didn't do it for me really...

6/10

Vote: Kesse