I liek the beat. Shoulda been turned down a little though. Overwpoers your vocals big time. You got some net-flow going on in some places. Needs a heavy dose of more emotion. Some adlibs wouldn't have hurt it. Would have made some of the track popout more. Second verse is louder and clearer than the first, flowed a little better, but I'm convinced; you need a mic. ASAP. There's some great lyrics in here that are getting beat up by your emotionless deliv. This is gonna be one of those tracks you'll probably want to come back and re-do whne you get more comfy rhyming. All in all an okay track that could have been a really good track with minor adjustments.

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