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Old 03-11-05, 10:56 PM   #2
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Beat = fire. Just thought I should mention that since I normally don't speka on beats, but since it's an underground assembly I gotta speak on it. It has a bionic organ sound to it which fits in perfectly with the meaning of the track. Sounds liek it was made with Acid.

The lyrics were hot as hell. The rhymescheme and deliv were something that should be studied by a lot of the cats here in my honest opinion. You know your vocal range and you def milk it for every dB it'll work for you man - good shit. The freeverse at the point where the second verse (and fourth) was good - but if it were written in rhyme it'd have been better (and by "better" I mean more entertaining). The track ends randomly at some point in the second verse (or 4th depending on how you look at it).

Definitely a 'different' track. I think it'd have been better had the account of the abduction it self been in rhythmic format. Sadly, just about no one here will have a mind-set to listen to a track like this. If this rhymed on the account portions, man, this would have definitely got my award for "Different Track that's still fire".

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