Thread: Dex vs Kordozar
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Old 03-11-05, 11:00 PM   #15
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Voted For: Kordozar


Kordozar
Nice Verse Man You Had Some Cool Punches Very Creative On This One, Personals Was There Man I Was Feeling Your Vocabulary, Structure Man It's Cool One Stretched Line That Was Your Closer, This Verse Was Dope For A Come Back, I Was Feeling The Opener The Most Nice

Dex
It Was A Cool Verse, i Wasn't Feeling The Personals Though, And The Punches Wasn't To Great, But It was Hitting, Structre, I See You Elevated On That, One THing Man Vocabulary You Need To Up That, And Change Up Your Rhyme Scheme, And You Could Add Some Meta's To Make It More Dope

Vote-Kord

Yo RTF On Me VS Lingustics, Not The One In My Sig Yo, And Explain It To, Me Vs Linguistics, I'll Up It So You Can Find It


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