Voted For: KOOL COL-B

uh, this is what i see

koolb....not a bad verse man, you had some stretched lines in places, but didnt affect you that much...you had some nice vocab and wordplay that helped your verse out....overall, you had better punches/personals that phive and your structure was better, therefore, your gettin my vote

phive....still lacking on the structure man, and it really takes away from your verse if its bad, but overall, you came pretty weak, punches and personals werent that good, so, thats really all you need to work on, gettin that structure fixed up, and coming harder with the punches personals....word

v/koolb

__________________