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Old 03-12-05, 04:44 AM   #4
Tha Q
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i didn't even realize u were flowin when u did come in...need a better lead in...Oh...dat was the hook?...man, u need better clarity and definition wit the transitions from intro to hook to verse...w/e


ur flow is oka..kinda basic and 80s...

need more internal rappin to make it dope

and ur voice is okay

multies were coo


and I liked the pedo line


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