FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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i didn't even realize u were flowin when u did come in...need a better lead in...Oh...dat was the hook?...man, u need better clarity and definition wit the transitions from intro to hook to verse...w/e
ur flow is oka..kinda basic and 80s...
need more internal rappin to make it dope
and ur voice is okay
multies were coo
and I liked the pedo line
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