Voted For: phive

vote=phive...but only just

feelin this one more than tha last of yours i read. you didn't try cram as many words in and it flowed better. tha endin was a bit wack, but you had some nice lines in tha middle (e.g. tha minotaur line)..and you coulda done with more personals

ufc had better personals, but to me yer shit didn't flow as well as phives...if it had you'd have won this..

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