yea what mad dog said.. i really like the beat... but it sorta seemed like you wern't into it.. i was surprised by the lyrics.. its pretty good but i know you can do better .. You do need better delivery and basiclly show that your into it.. nice job though 7/10 ..

plz leave feedback on my shyt..
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...734#post2018734

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