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Voted For: KizMiAzz

KizMiazz-not a bad drop.. you had some basic punches nice word play .. you had a nice structure in some aspects cept take out the "~" and jus put quotes or something cuz it jus makes it a lil less enjoyable to read . but other wise nice drop.. keep elevating though

Phive- very weak verse. work on your structure. you had metaphors except they packed zero punch...."Im sorry dawg that your second loss had to come so soon, a win for someone like you only comes once in a blue moon, youve got better luck cleanin ya ears with a harpoon, youve been destroyed, (KABOOM)" your getting better in your rhyme'n but seriously there is zero punch there it made no sense what so ever .. you def need to up your game.. go and read the tutorials and check out other battles .. o yea did i mention your structure? no hate jus elevate

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