Only the Illist
From: your worst nightmare |
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Voted For: Cincanatus
aight this battle was.... well... ok... kinda one sided.... but here is the break down...
Schema- first off weak opener... "latin for weak rhymer"? wtf.... not feelin it at all... sorry... aight but structure was ok but stretched in one bar near the end.... flow was good and didnt seem to fall off..punches and personals were bad tho...they just didnt hit hardly at all... vocab was ok but could have been better.... use better punches and personals and this could have been good..... overall a below par verse cause ive seen much better from you... 4/10
Fatal- aight yours was ok... structure leaves something to the immagination tho so work on that... i dont like the way it was set up like open middle closer... people can tell that with out you telling them.... flow was good tho... punches hit hard through out the verse as a whole and personals did well to... here is my favorite line:
Ya Ish Is Played Out Son, For You It's Always The Same Old Scheme
Rhymes Disapear When Spoke Like Pimples Being Hit By Vanishing Cream
^^^that was a NICE personal... love the wordplay off of his name... vocab was pretty good in ya verse... would have liked to see multis (from both of you) .... overall 7.5/10
ok Fatal got this in my opinion... no hate to schema but i have seen you come a lot harder than you did in this.... no hate to either of yall..... good battle but Fatal Lyrikz got this one hands down with an overall better battle verse... just came harder with the punches and personals especialy... good battle yall...
VOTE- Fatal Lyrikz............................................
Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.
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