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Old 03-12-05, 07:00 PM   #7
YOUNG_CITY
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Voted For: J DOT

I think jdot took this one with harder punches, and better personals. jdot-yo verse merked him i think. u didnt really have too many hard punche,s but this was a easy battle. i liked yo intro, and tha multies and shit, but then u stopped after that, and switched yo style up, and it stil flowed well. thats skill. i like that. some of yo lines was kinda stretched near tha end tho. elevate on that homie. but i still think u got this
whyte out-yo verse was coo. i think u came ight, and ur elevating, but i think u should work on thinkin up some harder punches. and yo rhymes were a lil too simple. if u worked on ur rhyming, and comin w/ harder punches, i think u can be dope, and u wouldve took this one.
overall-jd ott took tihs one by far to me. i think he had tha better verse, and he came out stronger in this one. NO Hate, yall just keep elevating