Voted For: schema

i guess i got blacklisted for some reason?
oh well, ill jus post mah vote up as feedback...

this battle was decent....
for the most part both of you came pretty good...

schema
a really strong verse here man....
your flow was nice and consistant all the way through...
but where you really get this were the punches...

go ahead IM your voters...and hope they prefer you...
but get ready for "yo i cant vote dude he merked you..."

good line here, had me laughing a bit...

same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude...
real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you...

best line in the verse in mah book...very creative...
closer was a lil weak, but overall verse was solid...

fatal lyrikz
yo verse was jus aight man...
flow was nice and consistant like schemas all the way through...nuttin really wrong there....
but like i said, the punches are where he got you...

He's Looking Blue, With His Tenth Loss, Or Is It Just S Dot Purple Label?
You Merking Me? Schema Is A Dreamer I Don't Think He's Capable

good idea to work the s dot label in...but the bar seems a bit stretched in the first line...

Listen, We Can't Hear Ish You Trying To Get Through Like Kids With No Ears
Silent Treatment With Votes, Now What A Good Way To End An RV Career

best part of the verse....had me laughin...
but those two were really the best two punches...and they aint as good as schemas

overall, battle was pretty nice...
a good read...
but schema takes this
v/ schema

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