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Old 03-12-05, 07:49 PM   #20
Terumoto
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Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

J DOT: Verse was pretty good. Flow was on pretty much throughout.... Punches were on and off... wordplay left something to be desired and I think it needed a slight vocab lift.

FlowIsSick: Try not to use links... Cos its not really a good personal if you need to put a link there. I personally dont click on the links, but i got the personals nevertheless... watch that for next time. Your flow was nice all the way through. Never fell off and the multis helped it along. Wordplay was nice. I felt that your punches hit harder as well...

Both of your structures were fine.
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