Voted For: Young Blaze

shit, was a pretty close battle, heres what i see....

young blaze, i thought you had the harder punches, but to be honest, you almost lost my vote on the account of your structure, you have to tune that down a bit....alot of your lines seem stretched and also seems like your forcing rhymes, thats not good, but your opponent didnt come that hard, so your lucky, haha, just fix up your structure....but overall, you had a pretty consistent drop, some nice creative, funny punches....few personals, not really though, good attempt at multies, most were just simple, but you could get the hang of it by elevating....

ktrini....thought you came pretty weak in this battle, and your punches and personals showed that, looked like there was no thought at all in them, plain shit, vocab was too easy, no wordplay...you attempted some multies, but you need to elevate your vocab and wordplay alot.....your structure and flow, though, however, were alright, that wasnt really a problem for you........you lost my vote because overall you came really weak and it was like reading a kids book of rhymes....sorry man, not hate

v/young blaze......rtf, honest explained vote plz. on either OneStepBeyond or Chowie Chow....thanks yo

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