Flyweight
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Voted For: J-Will
alright, heres how i saw this one:
structure/flow: tie... wills was all over the place and kinda hard to follow... evol had stretched lines and an overly simplistic rhyme scheme
punches: will gets this with more wordplay and harder punches... evol's punches were weak and madd played
overall, i thought both of you guys have major room for improvement, but will gets my vote, no hate homeys
return the favor please links in sig
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