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Old 03-12-05, 11:07 PM   #8
metaman
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Voted For: J-Will

alright, heres how i saw this one:

structure/flow: tie... wills was all over the place and kinda hard to follow... evol had stretched lines and an overly simplistic rhyme scheme

punches: will gets this with more wordplay and harder punches... evol's punches were weak and madd played

overall, i thought both of you guys have major room for improvement, but will gets my vote, no hate homeys

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