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Old 03-13-05, 12:39 AM   #8
**GHOSTE**
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slobk got this 1 for personals...wordplay...metas...and structure...u had way better flow...and ur verse was overall better...

phive...u need work on punches...especially personals...flow...wordplay...and multies...hit up a tutorial or 2...u got hella potential tho...

v/ slobk
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