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Old 03-13-05, 02:20 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by Dabatos
The beat is different from the usual beats peeps be using here.. but i like it.. your right, your first 2 verses are not only a lil choppy.. but really off flow man.. no offense.. but yea.. ur chorus is okay.. but not really catchy.. but its cool cuz it would be hard to think of a chorus with this beat.. but your last verse was good.. but it sounds like you wern't really into the beat.. and your delivery must be better man.. but just show energy wen you do another song.. cuz i wasn't really feeling it.. no offense but this i wut i give you.. 4/10.. just wut i think dude.. no beef iight?? but still better then some other peeps that do audio here..

plz leave feed on my shyt
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181447


Na ya right i'm still rusty as fuck i played this over again and i wasn't feelin it the beats good but to me it's like one of those beats that don't need vocals so ima take this off my s/click coz it was meh...but i might keep the lyrics though coz there are beats which should fit this like whoa...close this Seven
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