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im gonna have to give tis to you , your shit was way beter although your strucuture was off, but good decent shit,
both of you had real weak strucuture
MYth yoiur intro was wack, you always got to start out strong to keep thr readers atemntion and you failed to keep my attenetion your lines hwere streched, and your punches hwere played, and you played off his name too easily, use creativitie
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