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Old 03-13-05, 08:29 AM   #33
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Voted For: Drama Queen

you win, but only becuase buck shot didnt try as hard as i know he can

DQ, your shit wasnt that great, i didnt like how you came about the whole topic, its was diff. and creative which is dope, but you didnt have that much emotion, well atleast that is what i think, just try to eleavte on this shit, nxt time do a more easier topic so that you can stay on topic, but once agian your lucky buck shot didnt really try, i think that you should re battle, actually i will set it up for another topical if you like

BS..your shit was good but your structure was oof and your flow was off, you should have took more time becuase you ahd the emtion, and you had the right take on it, although it was a basic approach i liked it, you fell offf alot in some lines, just work on taking your time into things, not everything has to be keystyle
so if you want me to set it up just let me know and you and DQ can go at it one more time or even i can get in it, its all good fam, also Elevate your vocab

vote=DQ
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