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Voted For: Op!n!on

Op!n!on- you had alot of nice vocab. way better structure. you had better punches then 523. overall i thought you had a average verse.

Well we all know that you're wack, and that you can't rip a rhyme
I've KO'ed you once allready...time to do that shit a second timed
decent coulda done a lil more with it 5/10
Shit you're allready behind.......I'll be surprised if you get a vote
Man this battle was in my favour...before my verse was even wrote
again decent nothing special but still packed a punch 6/10
Give up the game, leave the site....you ain't nothing but a chump
Cuase kid you're more worthless than a legless man trying to jump
lines a lil played but still good..5/10

16/30

the kid 523 -

IP:

4-0 record, maybe youd get some respect
if you didnt target newbs, your just a reject
decent punch just didnt hit hard enough 3/10
You joined in the beginning of Febuary
Been here for a while and your STILL new to RV.
where is the rhyme n the punch?.. 2/10
I'll fuckin shit on you, get rid of you, your pitiful, what a disgrace
I'll fuckin stop spttin when theres no more shit to be rubbed in your face
ok you have a problem here you can trash talk but you need to put it into a good rhyme you had a good concept here you just didnt use it enough..1/10
Yeah, you beat me the first time.. all lucked
Op!n!ons still just one big pussy, waiting to get fucked
don't force rhymes...

6/30

over all op!n!on took it with better structure and better vocab.

Vote//Op!n!on