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Old 03-13-05, 02:23 PM   #14
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the kid
not feeling your style punches were on a weak roll, stucutre was horrible and the flow wasnt that great eather, some forced rhymes, and i wasnt feeling the verse one bit, try being more creative or something cuz your punches have no effect on this battle period.

Opnion
a way better verse the punches were alot better and the stucture was alot better the punches were what really came hard but you got this, seemed like a simple win for you, pz

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