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Old 03-13-05, 03:50 PM   #13
TheChosenOne
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Voted For: J-Will

ok im goin to make this simple
first with evolution you took to long elevate i didnt like how you started, you repeated the same thing over again J-Will said that he was back...kid, saying that was a waste of time
Your whole rhyme shit that you say...is just a waste of time
wow thats a bad way to start but you had ok personal and sort of good punches plus you strech ur words no dissrepect just stateing the facts.

Jwill your structer was off well both of your structers was not good but J will was sort of better you had good vocab and iight punches. just work on ur structer

i have to say i have to go with J-will
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