http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181336 hit me back

listening...........your voice is ok with the beat as far as the mix, you got an accent where you from?you need some work on your delivery, that first verse when you come in your not really flowing you kind of just reading it. you need to memorize it, the hook is ok, you might want to change, but that is best part of the song, i like how the beat breaks down for that too..............really you need to rewrite this, some of the shit just isnt flowing out, and your not rhyming all the time, just my two cents, not a bad drop though