Nice poem. Great use of words and vocabulary. There was a strong sense of emotion throughout the whole of the piece. Great use of imagery used to portray the different events and emotions.
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Originally Posted by A_M_H
I liked the last line that's y i live in complete silence & isolate myself from everybody here
i'ma live "Thugged Out" til my last breath & like a "Ghost" just disappear
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It shows a great emotion of independance but a greater image of lonliness.
Overall great poem man. Try to structure it a bit better next time. Thats about the only thing about it I can see thats a bit off. Really liked it. =() )